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如何讓英國留學ps更好

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1. 英國留學申請之教你如何寫好PS寫作

你好,懶馬顧問為你解答:
1、要想寫好PS,要知道PS的結構
首先,PS的結構要從了解PS的格式開始。
第一種自傳式:即將學習階段的經歷有選擇性的描述,闡述自己的能力特點。
第二種是敘事式,通過一件事情引出全文,來展現該事件中自己的特點和能力,這是國外學生常用的形式。
第三種是專業式,主要自己研究背景來展現自己的專業研究能力,主要是針對本科生申請研究生階段的PS。
PS從形式來說就是總分總模式,一般分為開頭、主體和結尾三部分。
開頭部分要足夠吸引人的眼球,先聲奪人,能夠吸引人繼續讀下去,同時點明主題;
中間部分圍繞主題層層展開,詳敘文字,填充內容,展現自己;
結尾既要回扣主題,又要提供最後的「透視」,但是不要僅僅對前文進行重復,也不要添加新東西。
2、要想寫好PS,要知道PS的內容
從內容方面而言,最基礎的是必備6W,即回答六個「為什麼」,即為什麼選擇這個專業,為什麼選擇這個項目,為什麼選擇這個學校,為什麼適合這個專業,為什麼適合這個項目,為什麼適合這個學校。圍繞這些話題,將文章展開完善起來,內容精彩、觀點獨到。
還要注意一點的是PS雖是個人陳述但一定要和個人介紹分開,不要一味誇獎自己的優點和過人經歷,而忽略了對於專業選擇上的闡述,招生官有時候在乎的並不是你本人有多厲害,而是你對於選擇專業的喜好及獨有的見解。
3、要想寫好PS,要知道PS的寫作手法
PS從寫作手法上來說要有起承轉合,所謂「起」就是要從宏觀上給自己一個定位,為整個文章做個基調。
接下來就是要「承」,從文章宏觀基調過渡到用具體的理由說服對方錄取你。
「轉」也可以成為升華,結合自身情況和將來學習的項目,對自己的未來有一個怎樣的期待和規劃。
「合」對前文進行提煉,照應開頭的基調,做到首尾呼應,這樣才做到一氣呵成,整個文章渾然一體。
此外,PS段落注意有長有短,有輕有重,有主有次,字數一般在800-1000字左右,切忌重復啰嗦。這樣,才能將PS撰寫的較為完美,值得一讀。
總之,完成後的PS應給人一種行文流水,從容自如的感覺。既不過分誇大自我,也不長篇大論沒有主次,而是一份獨家專屬的個人陳述。

2. 英國研究生的寫作技巧和ps

技巧一、突出重點,避免喧賓奪主

PS主要還是以自己的研究經歷和學術目標這些為主,這些經歷可以表現表現出學生的動手能力,學習研究能力,這些也是教授們想看到的。有些學生會不停的強調自己在學生會當主席的時候做了些什麼,如何的優秀,這些不是不能在PS中提,而是要少提,因為這些經歷不能證明你的專業知識水平,教授首先考慮的是你的學術能力,其次可能才會去看這個學生在其他方面的經歷和體現的能力。

比如有的學生在PS中寫了很多對申請有用的學術經歷,研究經歷,在最後的時候也用了幾句話來說自己大學期間還參加了一些課外的活動,那麼這樣的話反而讓讀者覺得這個學生不僅學習能力很強,同時還有這性格開朗,善於與人溝通合作的一面。

技巧二、不要求「全」,但要有「亮」

沒有人是完美的,在我們的大學四年,總有忽略了的地方,有些同學的.學習成績很好,但實習經歷不夠多,也不夠亮,有些同學的動手能力很突出,參加了很多的實習和研究項目,但GPA不算很高。面對自己的這些優勢和劣勢,要有一個正確的認識和分析,學習成績好,那就多花一點篇幅來突出自己的學習能力,讓教授從中看到自己的學習潛力,實踐操作經歷多,那麼就要多花點字數來說說自己在這些經歷中的收獲,以及談談通過這些經歷得到的對專業的理解。

技巧三、避免記流水賬

申請英國研究生留學,一般都在PS里花上幾段的長度來寫自己在大學期間的研究經歷,這是必須的也是很重要的,但寫的時候要有則重點,不能一味的描述和敘述,本科生在本科期間的經歷,對於看這些PS的教授來說都是小菜一碟的事情,所以他們不需要清清楚楚的知道的做這個事情的過程,而是你在這個經歷中你的收獲,你的成功與失敗,這些經歷又是如何促使你產生自己新的學術目標的,又是如何影響你的職業方向的。

英國研究生ps範文(以商科為例)

I have always been interested in businesses and how they operate, as well as being fascinated by other languages and cultural differences

My passion for the subject increased when I chose business studies as part of my main ecation at school. In addition to the general subjects such as mathematics, literature, history it also included marketing, accounting and economics. Although these subjects are somewhat demanding, I find them extremely interesting. After secondary school I decided to continue my ecation at Kazakh National University founded by Al Farabi, it is one of the best and oldest universities in Central Asia, in the faculty of the International Economic Relations. I believe that the degree I have obtained, is the best choice for me. I will be looking forward to learning about the international business world and I am relishing the thought of learning to integrate with people from different countries and cultures. The idea of learning to communicate with other people across the world is something that has always appealed greatly to me

My speciality that I have got after graating from the Kazakh National State University is in the International Economic Relations

I have studied financial management, macro- micro- economics, accounting, international currency-credit relations and other subjects. More profoundly I have studied international economic relations, international organisations, their function around the world and my diploma work "The analysis of economic aspects of Kazakhstan oil transportation abroad" was written on the basis of the research of the economics relations between Caspian countries: Russia, Azerzhan, Iran, Kazakhstan and Turkmenistan

Not all my work experience has been as a paid employee. Furthermore I began to take part time jobs when I was at the University; I worked for different financial institutions one of them was National Bank of Kazakhstan in the Credit Department as an Assistant of the Head Manager and in the Currency Department. My work in this Bank taught me to be self-organised, how to make analyses of credit rating and commentaries, function of the currency policy, which is one of the essential part of any bank's activities, and how to work out complex approaches in settlement of different issues and tasks. After this time I have changed my field of work and continued it in the Close Stock Company "KazTransOil" as an Accountant, which is analysing and developing the plan of transportation oil into different countries

Having important previous experience I have applied my knowledge and skills at the position of an Assistant of Head Accountant in the Financial Department. The main goals of the Department - to provide necessary structure of transportation for joining the main oil field with the processing factories and export it abroad. My responsibility included calculating the budget of the Company, making up balance sheet, and analysing a project plan. However I realised that to work as a professional specialist in a business area for the broader and deeper understanding finance, accounting and international environment are needed

For me as a young specialist it is very important to try an opportunity to continue my ecation in the University that has proved itself as one of the best among the other recognised universities focusing on business studies, promoting and facilitating research in such significant period when integration is outgrowing to globalisation and countries becoming more dependent on each other. I think that my interest in accounting and finance, ecational background and professional experience will open new perspectives for me if I will study at this University. Now I feel that I have potential for realisation myself in the area of finance and my constant interest to this science, to study more deeply this subject, ability to distinguish main economic trends will assist me to transmit my knowledge to other specialists.

3. 想去英國留學,該如何寫一篇精彩的ps

1.在開始之前,校方要求申請者先去了解LSE開設的各個專業和項目,並且結合自己的興趣和過往經歷來確定自己對哪個領域有興趣,在哪個方向有動力和優勢。在PS的寫作中,申請者應當展示出自己對所申請專業的興趣和強勢之處。
2.校方強烈建議你在PS中主要討論你想申請的專業是什麼,你為什麼要申請這個專業。校方建議80%以上的內容應當是聊學術的,而不要編什麼家庭悲慘故事,或者講什麼雞湯勵志啊什麼的。
校方說你可以提到你經歷過的活動,參加過的比賽等,但你寫出來的經歷應當和你要申請的專業比較貼合,能夠證明你的能力或者動力。
所以,同學們,在申請這個專業之前,請先認真地瀏覽一下官方網站的細節介紹,看一看這個專業的課程設置。或者有條件的話,多搜一下該專業的宣傳視頻,所承辦的活動視頻等,全方位地了解,再結合自己的經歷去寫自己的個人陳述。
3.關於課外活動,LSE是這么規定的:
如果你要誇你體育啊,藝術啊,志願者啊,學生會啊什麼的,請不要讓篇幅超過20%!
4.LSE還給出了一個錯誤PS示範,讓大家規避。
"I have always dreamed of coming to LSE since I was young. It has been a dream of mine to study at this institution, which is well renowned for its social science courses.
I am currently studying History, English and Business and Management at Higher level and Italian, Maths and Chemistry at Standard level in the International Baccalaureate, and feel that these subjects are providing me with a solid background for university study.
I want to study History because I want to be a world class Historian, and feel that this degree will help me. I am especially interested in Ancient History, particularly the history concerning the Roman Empire. I am fascinated by the way in which the empire was run, and the events that led to its downfall.
"I was the captain of the school football team, and this has taught me the importance of working together as a team, and allowed me to prioritise my time between my studies and football practice. I feel that this has provided me with the experience to successfully balance my academic and social life, and I plan to continue this balance whilst at university.
It is my dream to become an alumnus of the School, and I am sure that as I am the top student of my class, you will offer me a place."
LSE給出以下點評:
1.申請者指出了自己對history有興趣,但沒有寫明白自己做了什麼努力,參加了什麼活動,做了什麼研究。
相反,申請者說了說自己在足球隊很厲害,很顯然,這對申請歷史專業沒什麼用。
2.申請者特別提到了LSE是個好學校,但好像這並不能完全說明什麼,還有點浪費紙。
3.申請者特別費勁地列舉了自己學的所有IB課程名字,但很顯然這些課程名字是可以在qualification界面裡面查到的,申請者這是在浪費書寫空間。PS的內容是應該陳述自己為什麼選擇意向專業,並且陳述自己的實力和動力的。

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