1. 英国留学申请之教你如何写好PS写作
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1、要想写好PS，要知道PS的结构
首先，PS的结构要从了解PS的格式开始。
第一种自传式：即将学习阶段的经历有选择性的描述，阐述自己的能力特点。
第二种是叙事式，通过一件事情引出全文，来展现该事件中自己的特点和能力，这是国外学生常用的形式。
第三种是专业式，主要自己研究背景来展现自己的专业研究能力，主要是针对本科生申请研究生阶段的PS。
PS从形式来说就是总分总模式，一般分为开头、主体和结尾三部分。
开头部分要足够吸引人的眼球，先声夺人，能够吸引人继续读下去，同时点明主题;
中间部分围绕主题层层展开，详叙文字，填充内容，展现自己;
结尾既要回扣主题，又要提供最后的“透视”，但是不要仅仅对前文进行重复，也不要添加新东西。
2、要想写好PS，要知道PS的内容
从内容方面而言，最基础的是必备6W，即回答六个“为什么”，即为什么选择这个专业，为什么选择这个项目，为什么选择这个学校，为什么适合这个专业，为什么适合这个项目，为什么适合这个学校。围绕这些话题，将文章展开完善起来，内容精彩、观点独到。
还要注意一点的是PS虽是个人陈述但一定要和个人介绍分开，不要一味夸奖自己的优点和过人经历，而忽略了对于专业选择上的阐述，招生官有时候在乎的并不是你本人有多厉害，而是你对于选择专业的喜好及独有的见解。
3、要想写好PS，要知道PS的写作手法
PS从写作手法上来说要有起承转合，所谓“起”就是要从宏观上给自己一个定位，为整个文章做个基调。
接下来就是要“承”，从文章宏观基调过渡到用具体的理由说服对方录取你。
“转”也可以成为升华，结合自身情况和将来学习的项目，对自己的未来有一个怎样的期待和规划。
“合”对前文进行提炼，照应开头的基调，做到首尾呼应，这样才做到一气呵成，整个文章浑然一体。
此外，PS段落注意有长有短，有轻有重，有主有次，字数一般在800-1000字左右，切忌重复啰嗦。这样，才能将PS撰写的较为完美，值得一读。
总之，完成后的PS应给人一种行文流水，从容自如的感觉。既不过分夸大自我，也不长篇大论没有主次，而是一份独家专属的个人陈述。
2. 英国研究生的写作技巧和ps
技巧一、突出重点，避免喧宾夺主
PS主要还是以自己的研究经历和学术目标这些为主，这些经历可以表现表现出学生的动手能力，学习研究能力，这些也是教授们想看到的。有些学生会不停的强调自己在学生会当主席的时候做了些什么，如何的优秀，这些不是不能在PS中提，而是要少提，因为这些经历不能证明你的专业知识水平，教授首先考虑的是你的学术能力，其次可能才会去看这个学生在其他方面的经历和体现的能力。
比如有的学生在PS中写了很多对申请有用的学术经历，研究经历，在最后的时候也用了几句话来说自己大学期间还参加了一些课外的活动，那么这样的话反而让读者觉得这个学生不仅学习能力很强，同时还有这性格开朗，善于与人沟通合作的一面。
技巧二、不要求“全”，但要有“亮”
没有人是完美的，在我们的大学四年，总有忽略了的地方，有些同学的.学习成绩很好，但实习经历不够多，也不够亮，有些同学的动手能力很突出，参加了很多的实习和研究项目，但GPA不算很高。面对自己的这些优势和劣势，要有一个正确的认识和分析，学习成绩好，那就多花一点篇幅来突出自己的学习能力，让教授从中看到自己的学习潜力，实践操作经历多，那么就要多花点字数来说说自己在这些经历中的收获，以及谈谈通过这些经历得到的对专业的理解。
技巧三、避免记流水账
申请英国研究生留学，一般都在PS里花上几段的长度来写自己在大学期间的研究经历，这是必须的也是很重要的，但写的时候要有则重点，不能一味的描述和叙述，本科生在本科期间的经历，对于看这些PS的教授来说都是小菜一碟的事情，所以他们不需要清清楚楚的知道的做这个事情的过程，而是你在这个经历中你的收获，你的成功与失败，这些经历又是如何促使你产生自己新的学术目标的，又是如何影响你的职业方向的。
英国研究生ps范文(以商科为例)
I have always been interested in businesses and how they operate, as well as being fascinated by other languages and cultural differences
My passion for the subject increased when I chose business studies as part of my main ecation at school. In addition to the general subjects such as mathematics, literature, history it also included marketing, accounting and economics. Although these subjects are somewhat demanding, I find them extremely interesting. After secondary school I decided to continue my ecation at Kazakh National University founded by Al Farabi, it is one of the best and oldest universities in Central Asia, in the faculty of the International Economic Relations. I believe that the degree I have obtained, is the best choice for me. I will be looking forward to learning about the international business world and I am relishing the thought of learning to integrate with people from different countries and cultures. The idea of learning to communicate with other people across the world is something that has always appealed greatly to me
My speciality that I have got after graating from the Kazakh National State University is in the International Economic Relations
I have studied financial management, macro- micro- economics, accounting, international currency-credit relations and other subjects. More profoundly I have studied international economic relations, international organisations, their function around the world and my diploma work "The analysis of economic aspects of Kazakhstan oil transportation abroad" was written on the basis of the research of the economics relations between Caspian countries: Russia, Azerzhan, Iran, Kazakhstan and Turkmenistan
Not all my work experience has been as a paid employee. Furthermore I began to take part time jobs when I was at the University; I worked for different financial institutions one of them was National Bank of Kazakhstan in the Credit Department as an Assistant of the Head Manager and in the Currency Department. My work in this Bank taught me to be self-organised, how to make analyses of credit rating and commentaries, function of the currency policy, which is one of the essential part of any bank's activities, and how to work out complex approaches in settlement of different issues and tasks. After this time I have changed my field of work and continued it in the Close Stock Company "KazTransOil" as an Accountant, which is analysing and developing the plan of transportation oil into different countries
Having important previous experience I have applied my knowledge and skills at the position of an Assistant of Head Accountant in the Financial Department. The main goals of the Department - to provide necessary structure of transportation for joining the main oil field with the processing factories and export it abroad. My responsibility included calculating the budget of the Company, making up balance sheet, and analysing a project plan. However I realised that to work as a professional specialist in a business area for the broader and deeper understanding finance, accounting and international environment are needed
For me as a young specialist it is very important to try an opportunity to continue my ecation in the University that has proved itself as one of the best among the other recognised universities focusing on business studies, promoting and facilitating research in such significant period when integration is outgrowing to globalisation and countries becoming more dependent on each other. I think that my interest in accounting and finance, ecational background and professional experience will open new perspectives for me if I will study at this University. Now I feel that I have potential for realisation myself in the area of finance and my constant interest to this science, to study more deeply this subject, ability to distinguish main economic trends will assist me to transmit my knowledge to other specialists.
3. 想去英国留学，该如何写一篇精彩的ps
1.在开始之前，校方要求申请者先去了解LSE开设的各个专业和项目，并且结合自己的兴趣和过往经历来确定自己对哪个领域有兴趣，在哪个方向有动力和优势。在PS的写作中，申请者应当展示出自己对所申请专业的兴趣和强势之处。
2.校方强烈建议你在PS中主要讨论你想申请的专业是什么，你为什么要申请这个专业。校方建议80%以上的内容应当是聊学术的，而不要编什么家庭悲惨故事，或者讲什么鸡汤励志啊什么的。
校方说你可以提到你经历过的活动，参加过的比赛等，但你写出来的经历应当和你要申请的专业比较贴合，能够证明你的能力或者动力。
所以，同学们，在申请这个专业之前，请先认真地浏览一下官方网站的细节介绍，看一看这个专业的课程设置。或者有条件的话，多搜一下该专业的宣传视频，所承办的活动视频等，全方位地了解，再结合自己的经历去写自己的个人陈述。
3.关于课外活动，LSE是这么规定的：
如果你要夸你体育啊，艺术啊，志愿者啊，学生会啊什么的，请不要让篇幅超过20%！
4.LSE还给出了一个错误PS示范，让大家规避。
"I have always dreamed of coming to LSE since I was young. It has been a dream of mine to study at this institution, which is well renowned for its social science courses.
I am currently studying History, English and Business and Management at Higher level and Italian, Maths and Chemistry at Standard level in the International Baccalaureate, and feel that these subjects are providing me with a solid background for university study.
I want to study History because I want to be a world class Historian, and feel that this degree will help me. I am especially interested in Ancient History, particularly the history concerning the Roman Empire. I am fascinated by the way in which the empire was run, and the events that led to its downfall.
"I was the captain of the school football team, and this has taught me the importance of working together as a team, and allowed me to prioritise my time between my studies and football practice. I feel that this has provided me with the experience to successfully balance my academic and social life, and I plan to continue this balance whilst at university.
It is my dream to become an alumnus of the School, and I am sure that as I am the top student of my class, you will offer me a place."
LSE给出以下点评：
1.申请者指出了自己对history有兴趣，但没有写明白自己做了什么努力，参加了什么活动，做了什么研究。
相反，申请者说了说自己在足球队很厉害，很显然，这对申请历史专业没什么用。
2.申请者特别提到了LSE是个好学校，但好像这并不能完全说明什么，还有点浪费纸。
3.申请者特别费劲地列举了自己学的所有IB课程名字，但很显然这些课程名字是可以在qualification界面里面查到的，申请者这是在浪费书写空间。PS的内容是应该陈述自己为什么选择意向专业，并且陈述自己的实力和动力的。